Moment in Time Writing
Moment in Time Writing Term 2 2017
WALT write "a moment in time" piece of writing.
Specific goals (Please highlight yours)
- I can support my ideas with detail (Ideas)
- I can communicate precise meaning related to the topic (Vocabulary)
- I can use language that is suitable to the topic, audience and purpose. (Structure & Language)
Crash! A big rock descends down upon me as I walk past.
I was walking my dog along the sandy beach when a big egg fell through the sky from space. Why am I there?I am there to walk my dog.I can see three big eggs crackling as I walk past.
I can smell the salty water and the fishy seaweed. I can taste the yummy food I had before I went to the beach to walk my dog. I can hear the waves swishing side to side. I can also hear the kids shouting in the background as my dog and I walk past.
I can feel the squishy sand between my toes.I can feel the sloppy seaweed sticking to my foot.I can also feel the soft seagull feathers.
I can see dogs in the water and then the egg starts to hatch. It is so exciting that I grab someone to watch the egg hatch with me
I can taste the salty water that I swallowed when I was having a swim two minutes ago.
I love to discover new things in my life like this.
My reflection on this writing:
I have worked towards achieving my goals by:
- I tried to use words that show what I am sensing eg sight, hearing, smelling, tasting and feeling.