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Moment in Time Writing

Moment in Time Writing Term 2 2017
WALT write "a moment in time" piece of writing. Specific goals (Please highlight yours) I can support my ideas with detail  (Ideas) I can communicate precise meaning related to the topic  (Vocabulary) I can use language that is suitable to the topic, audience and purpose. (Structure & Language)
About to Hatch

Crash! A big rock descends down upon me as I walk past.
I was walking my dog along the sandy beach when a big egg fell through the sky from space. Why am I there?I am there to walk my dog.I can see three big eggs crackling as I walk  past.
I can smell the salty water and the fishy seaweed. I can taste the yummy food I had    before I went to the beach to walk my dog. I can hear the waves swishing side to                                side. I can also hear the kids shouting in the background as my dog and I walk past.
I can feel the squishy sand between my toes.I can feel the sloppy seaweed sticking to my foot.I can also feel the soft seagu…